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Fool In Love

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Angel of Music
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Fool In Love

Post by Angel of Music »

Title:Fool In Love

What a FOOL I am!
To love one I knew,
Didn't love me back!
To keep crawling back and hoping,
Hoping he would love me after his next refusal.
FOOL,FOOL,FOOL!
I hope I shall die soon!
Humiliating myself for such an unworthy man!
Let my soul rot in hell for my stupidity!
SHAME,SHAME,SHAME!
FOOL,FOOL,FOOL!
What a FOOL I am!

Okay. I was bored and angry when I wrote this. What do you think?
Motoko Chan
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re: Fool In Love

Post by Motoko Chan »

I like it.
Cross your legs and smile!
Angel of Music
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re: Fool In Love

Post by Angel of Music »

Really? Yay! :mrgreen:
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re: Fool In Love

Post by Commander~Lightning~Spike »

as good as the other I can't say which is better because they r both great. :mrgreen:
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Post by Angel of Music »

Thanks!:mrgreen:
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