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vash the man-slayer
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my song

Post by vash the man-slayer »

I watch how the
Moon sits in the sky
In the dark night
Shining with the light from the sun
The sun doesn't give life to the moon
Assuming the moon's gonna owe it one
It makes me think of how you act to me
You do favors and then rapidly
You just turn around and start asking me
About things you want back from me
I'm sick of the tension
Sick of the hunger
Sick of you acting like I owe you this
Find another place
To feed your greed
While I find a place to rest

I want to be in another place
I hate when you say you don't understand
You'll see it's not meant to be
I want to be in the energy, not with the enemy
A place for my head

Maybe someday I'll be just like you
And step on people like you do and
Run away the people I thought I knew
I remember back then who you were
You used to be calm
Used to be strong
Used to be generous
But you should've known
That you'd
Wear out your welcome
Now you see
How quiet it is
All alone
I'm so
Pyro Psycho
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Post by Pyro Psycho »

that was cool!!!!!!!
keep it up!!!!!!!!
good song are you in a band? :mrgreen:
i told yuo about stares dog
Motoko Chan
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re: my song

Post by Motoko Chan »

I like it.
Cross your legs and smile!
Smileycute_Kagome
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Post by Smileycute_Kagome »

woah...nice =D> =D> =D> ...kewl.....i luv it!
Bambi
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re: my song

Post by Bambi »

That was soooo kewl. Keep it up =D> =D> =D> =D> \:D/ \:D/ \:D/ \:D/ \:D/ \:D/ \:D/
Apo , Akki, Limbo, Wallaby, Rainmaker, Ender, Kiddo, Cherry, Panda*, Aoi, Sam & BikiButt =P~ <3
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Str1ke
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Post by Str1ke »

Good Stuff. :shock:
Hatsuharu
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re: my song

Post by Hatsuharu »

Are you saying you WROTE the song? :x
vash the man-slayer
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re: my song

Post by vash the man-slayer »

me and my friend
but a wrote mosh of the song he only added da last part
Motoko Chan
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re: my song

Post by Motoko Chan »

coolies.
Cross your legs and smile!
Annaxubella
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Post by Annaxubella »

Great job, nice poem \:D/
Little Bit
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Post by Little Bit »

I like this song! *attempts to play the guitar part in the beginning*
I love Linkin Park! :love: Cheaster is such a great singer.
RJD2
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re: my song

Post by RJD2 »

that's a linkin park song you didn't write kid. nice try though.
Don't Cheat ya' self treat ya' self.
♥DIVA♥
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re: my song

Post by ♥DIVA♥ »

ohhhhhhhh busted. i was wondering when someone whould notice.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=33pw2nEAHgc
The original, HOMUNCULUS LUST
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saddest song/video in the world along with the saddest movie http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8TFZyQDyFXw
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