Tears of Anger, Tears of blood.

Eiri Yuki · Post by **Eiri Yuki** » Sep 11, 2005 1:32am

I cant cry,
Men dont cry.
I have to stand up,
I have to forget,
all that was done to me.
I stop the wetness in my eyes,
I change my feelings.
My Tears are now in blood,
never coming out but always there,
always bleeding in my heart.
My tears are made of my anger,
always trying to be free,
to retrieve that which was stolen from me.
My tears are of pain,
that which i must never show,
the pain which must be hidden from the world.
So my tears run through me,
building up in force,
but i build the dam higher and higher,
so i can stave of the waters.

I dont think its one of my best but.......

Ethello · Post by **Ethello** » Sep 11, 2005 1:19pm

This one is TOO sad

No it's not as good as some of your others
you can do much better than this.......

Eiri Yuki · Post by **Eiri Yuki** » Sep 11, 2005 3:04pm

Thanks...i think....

Ethello · Post by **Ethello** » Sep 11, 2005 3:40pm

Eiri Yuki · Post by **Eiri Yuki** » Sep 13, 2005 3:11am

Ethello · Post by **Ethello** » Sep 14, 2005 2:00pm

nozomi · Post by **nozomi** » Sep 14, 2005 3:17pm

This is great, Eiri.

Tears of Anger, Tears of blood.

What do you think?

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