My Lover ... By: Lillith

[Zeromancer's Angel]

You who i dream of
not can take you away
my black dove
you... My lover...


Stay with me forever
our love will endeavour
I love you....
My lover


In the winter i am cold
certain secrets never told
you embrace me with your arm
When i am with you there is no harm


If you ask me what i want to do
i want to sit here and think of you
you and only you ...
My Lover...


Dedicated to : Alexiel Strife... My hun-hun

[Spetsnaz]

Awww that's so sweet . I'm happy for you. I hope you two will be very happy together

[The Procrastinator]

A bit of a cliche...
It kinda sounds like you... wrote whatever was on your mind. It's little dry, but then again that could be your style. Writing from the top of your head isn't a bad thing, don't get me wrong, but it just doesn't seem like you put too much effort into it.

I'm sure he'll like it though. It's always nice to have things dedicated to you.

[Zeromancer's Angel]

Awww that's so sweet . I'm happy for you. I hope you two will be very happy together

^_^ thankies Twilight

[Ayame_Kodoku]

Wow, that's incredibly sweet and the poem's very good. Excellent!

[Zeromancer's Angel]

thankies ^_^ ^_^

[Alexiel Strife]

Wow this this the first love poem anyones written for me ^ ^"
I LOVE YOUUU!
I LOVE YOUUU!!
I LOVE YOUUU!!!!

[Zeromancer's Angel]

I LOVE YOU TOO!!! ^_^ -_- ^_^

[Alexiel Strife]

did you see me _ _!

[htt10101]

thats a very nice poem. alexiel strife...you're very lucky

[Zeromancer's Angel]

thankyou everyone for your compliments


see you where? send me a linky babe....^_^

[Alexiel Strife]

I know It's like a dream.

[Zeromancer's Angel]

g2g babe

[OniKira]

very nice, heartwarming!

[Zeromancer's Angel]

^_^

[Biki]

i like it. its sweet.