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Nyko
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Peoms by me

Post by Nyko »

Boys

A heart is not a plaything
A heart is not a toy
But if you want it broken just give it to a boy
Boys they like to play with things
To see what makes them run
But when it comes to kissing they do it all for fun
Boys never give their hearts away
They play us girls for fools;
They wait until we give our hearts
And then they play it cool.
You wonder where he is at night
You will wonder if he’s true.
One moment you will be happy
One moment you will be blue.
If you bet a chance to see him
Your heart begins to dance.
Your life revolves around him
There’s nothing like romance.
And then it starts to happen
You worry day and night
You see, my friend, you’re losing him.
It turns out right.
Boys are great, though immature
The price you pay is high
He may seem sweet and gorgeous
But remember he is just a boy
Don’t fall in love with just a boy.
That takes a lot of nerve.
You see, my friend, you need a man
To get you what you deserve.
So when you think that you’re in love,
Be careful if you can.
Before you give your heart away
Make sure that he’s a man.


Do you love me?


Do you love me, or do you not,
You told me once, but I forgot,
Do you care about me, do you need me,
Do you plan to ever leave me!
For you I’ve cried, for you I’d die,
Just to know you’ll never say bye,
Do you love me, or do you not,
You told me once, but I forgot,


McDonalds


Time is passing
McDonalds just walked by
Getting ready to order
A Big Mac and a fry


Up at the counter now
When a little girl I see
Walks right up
And cuts in front of me


She placed her order
It was same as mine
I’m thinking what the heck
No cutsies in line


But I’m really nice
So I let her though
I would do the same
Just for you


Up at the counter now
For the second time
But they’re out of Big Macs
The little girl took mine


I walked to her table
And asked her to share
She said “No
You shouldn’t have let me up there.”


Now standing here starving
Time being spent
So I said forget it…
Snatched it and went!
I feel like I have just ripped my heart out and handed it to the devil saying, "Take me I'm heartless."
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Re: Peoms by me

Post by Pink Supervisor|EL »

perty ^_^ ... like the Mcdonalds one
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Post by Nyko »

oh that one :shock: :-#
I feel like I have just ripped my heart out and handed it to the devil saying, "Take me I'm heartless."
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Post by Yuri Volte Hyuga »

Nice poem, but us boys aren't that bad, lol.
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Post by Raoul Duke »

A quick google search shows us that all these poems are plagiarised.
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Post by Yuri Volte Hyuga »

^
Oh. Well the person who thought up of it did a good job.

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Post by vengeance »

stolen or not, i'm glad she posted them. they're beautiful.
men, ya love em ya hate em.
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Post by Blood »

Yes what Vengence Said. But the boys one is oh so true, save, men are just as bad well, Not all guys are like that, but in general, yeah its true
First one to complain, leaves with a blood stain.
They could care less as long as someone'll bleed.
I for one can see no blood.
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Post by Hinato kazuya »

Aristotle wrote:A quick google search shows us that all these poems are plagiarised.
Good enough for me so this topic is now locked. The Talent Section is for posting your own works only.
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