...my poem...freestyle type...untitled

LiquidMist · Post by **LiquidMist** » Aug 10, 2006 8:10pm

...deleted poem...

AmiGurl · Post by **AmiGurl** » Aug 11, 2006 4:51am

awww, that's a sweet poem. very deep. I wonder who you're saying "thank you" to?

LiquidMist · Post by **LiquidMist** » Aug 11, 2006 8:33am

AmiGurl wrote:awww, that's a sweet poem. very deep. I wonder who you're saying "thank you" to?

well...im thanking my b/f... I guess if it wasn't for him, i wouldnt be able to open up much. esp. to my ma. Ty baby! And ty Ami for reading my poem!*tears* thank you! *bows down*

Depu Techiikue · Post by **Depu Techiikue** » Aug 11, 2006 11:10pm

Great poem Mist. Wow, that's awesome that your boyfriend has had such a positive influence on your life. Have you shown this to him yet? If not, you should. If so, you have shown him how much he means to you through these words, and he should cherish it forever.

GravyTrain · Post by **GravyTrain** » Aug 11, 2006 11:13pm

I think you've successfully raped the context in which the word 'use' can be used.

LiquidMist · Post by **LiquidMist** » Aug 12, 2006 7:10am

Depu Techiikue wrote:

Great poem Mist. Wow, that's awesome that your boyfriend has had such a positive influence on your life. Have you shown this to him yet? If not, you should. If so, you have shown him how much he means to you through these words, and he should cherish it forever.

Ty,

i will

LiquidMist · Post by **LiquidMist** » Aug 12, 2006 7:11am

GravyTrain wrote:I think you've successfully raped the context in which the word 'use' can be used.

Its called "Repetition!"

eh...o'well.

...my poem...freestyle type...untitled

so is it...good...okay...or needs work?

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