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My poem.

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Raoul Duke
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Post by Raoul Duke »

wakai wrote:i never type poems anout woman i found that one and that was a perfect answer to her i dont need a men by my side.

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i only write dark poems not love poems.
I never said i wrote it
LOL! You implied it. And you never said you didnt write it or give credit for whoever did write it.
Sif you can get out of this one so easily!
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Post by WAKAI »

i can write that ligth stuff its like garlick to me
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Post by josh »

come again in english this time?

and if it is already is in english, dim it down a shade...
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Wakai, i must say, your lies are pretty bad. Allow me to prove you wrong:

1) You cannnot type well.
2) You cannot spell well.
3) You cannot write a sentence properly.
4) You have horrible diction.
5) You refuse to use punctuation for continuation's sake.
6) You can't even state your point.


There is nothing wrong with not being able to do those well. But what is wrong is the fact that you lied to other people who judged and respected your poetic talent. How are we to believe with all this that you didn't copy those poems from a forum or an unregistered site? I think you owe some apologies to people who actually believed in your talent.


This isn't just a message to Wakai, its to all of you losers who feign your talent. You can silently stop posting the crappy and plagiarized poetry, or apologize to others. I repeatedly urge you frauds to cease or confess, otherwise, I will take you down. Why? Because I enjoy it. I enjoy proving people wrong despite the consequences. So please, save me the 3 mins and 12 seconds and confess. Unless you want me to manually go through your posts and cross-refer it with major poem communities(forums) or google.
Last edited by Ender on Mar 11, 2005 7:59am, edited 2 times in total.
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Post by josh »

take it too the limit...lol 8) GO ENDER!
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Ender wrote:Wakai, i must say, your lies are pretty bad. Allow me to prove you wrong:

1) You cannnot type well.
2) You cannot spell well.
3) You cannot write a sentence properly.
4) You have horrible diction.
5) You refuse to use punctuation for continuation's sake.
6) You can't even state your point.


There is nothing wrong with not being able to do those well. But what is wrong is the fact that you lied to other people who judged and respected your poetic talent. How are we to believe with all this that you didn't copy those poems from a forum or an unregistered site? I think you owe some apologies to people who actually believed in your talent.


This isn't just a message to Wakai, its to all of you losers who feign your talent. You can silently stop posting the crappy and plagiarized poetry, or apologize to others. I repeatedly urge you frauds to cease or confess, otherwise, I will take you down. Why? Because I enjoy it. I enjoy proving people wrong despite the consequences. So please, save me the 3 mins and 12 seconds and confess. Unless you want me to manually go through your posts and cross-refer it with major poem communities(forums) or google.
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Post by MoonlightRose Kurama »

[quote="Ender"]Wakai, i must say, your lies are pretty bad. Allow me to prove you wrong:

1) You cannnot type well.
2) You cannot spell well.
3) You cannot write a sentence properly.
4) You have horrible diction.
5) You refuse to use punctuation for continuation's sake.
6) You can't even state your point.


There is nothing wrong with not being able to do those well. But what is wrong is the fact that you lied to other people who judged and respected your poetic talent. How are we to believe with all this that you didn't copy those poems from a forum or an unregistered site? I think you owe some apologies to people who actually believed in your talent.


This isn't just a message to Wakai, its to all of you losers who feign your talent. You can silently stop posting the crappy and plagiarized poetry, or apologize to others. I repeatedly urge you frauds to cease or confess, otherwise, I will take you down. Why? Because I enjoy it. I enjoy proving people wrong despite the consequences. So please, save me the 3 mins and 12 seconds and confess. Unless you want me to manually go through your posts and cross-refer it with major poem communities(forums) or google.[/quote]

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Post by WAKAI »

for your info

am latino I make poems in spanish
It's hard trying to translate them into english.
there is so much difference in words to use

EX;ICARO, quisiera ser,
para besarte de nuevo
para poderte ver,
para quemarme en tu fuego
para aliviarme despues.
Viento, quisiera ser,
para acariciar tu pelo,
para tocar tu cuerpo,
para poderte tener.
Lluvia, quisiera ser,
para mojarte de nuevo,
para humedecer tus labios,
para despertar mi alma,
para secarte despues.


I want you to translate it into perfect english. :evil: in my head I think as two
as latino and english speaking person
its hard to bring the words.
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Post by MoonlightRose Kurama »

First I need to learn some more spanish senior.(senioretta).
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Post by WAKAI »

exacly you cant translate it so before you say i can make sentences make sense ask wat are they.

me wakai[young] speaks as he writes I speak spanglish
and write spanglish.

pps
its muchacho senor is for a merried guy
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Post by Ender »

Wakai are you doing this just to p*ss me off or are you a clinically certified dumbass?


Seriously, now you come up with the excuse that you translated that poem from spanish? "am a latino"- oh yeah that's supposed to be a fail safe excuse right? Wrong moron, no self-respecting latino ever gives himself a title of "latino". That is a term used in classification of demographics(let me explain to you what it means since you're a "latino"....it means that people refer to themselves as hispanic, portugese, mexican, brazilian,etc not "latino"). Yeah, good choice of b.s.ing; let me guess you're going to delete that post too, aren't you?


Ok, whatever jerk. You are not getting away with deleting your copied poem. Guess why? Because somone quoted you. Yeah, its true you can delete the poem that you copied and posted, but you can't delete it when others quote you...yeah you officially fail life. Go to another forum and pull these stunts.....not here, don't degrade the few people who have real talent with your worthless ineptitude.

Seriously dude, you're the most pathetic person ever. When you cheat at something, learn not to suck at it. Oh yeah, I can't wait until you post your next "original" half-assed poem. I've seen some stupid people, but Wakai, I hand it to you....no one has ever made me more angry and amused than you.






Say, you know what? i got a snazzy idea...why don't you actually write a comeback that isn't ripped off? I dare you, I double dare you "latino" boy.
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Post by WAKAI »

to p*ss u off

but ill stop know
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Post by MoonlightRose Kurama »

[quote="wakai"]exacly you cant translate it so before you say i can make sentences make sense ask wat are they.

me wakai[young] speaks as he writes I speak spanglish
and write spanglish.

pps
its muchacho senor is for a merried guy[/quote]

But you are a Senor (senoritta) :mrgreen:
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Post by Delance »

geez! u guys stop beating wakai! people make mistakes. jst 4give him. :)
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Post by josh »

This is a bloody outrage! Im taking this to the priminister!

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Post by Delance »

go ahead! :mrgreen:
ya, i think he deserves a little consequence.
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