Okay this one is one that I just wrote and please don't take any offence by it or be really mean.
I don't need a man by my side.
I don't need a man by my side
For I am independent
A woman with a lot of pride.
I don't need a man by my side.
I have my rights and I enjoy being free
So don't even bother getting down on one knee
I don't need a man by my side.
A man as a friend is okay
But if a man wants more
Then I tell them to go away
I don't need a man by my side.
So why do you even bother to try
Because these feelings I have inside
Haven't changed even over time.
And so now I say to any man that comes my way
I don't need a man by my side.[/i]
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My poem.
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My poem.
I'm with Dark V!
Things Not To Do At Hogwarts:
Crashing a Ford Anglia into the Whomping willow is not the best entrance to make. Crashing it into Snape's office is.
Things Not To Do At Hogwarts:
Crashing a Ford Anglia into the Whomping willow is not the best entrance to make. Crashing it into Snape's office is.
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Re: re: My poem.
[quote="wakai"]am sorry its agood poem but on like you
i need a woma
sorry I know is your post but here it goes
To have the love of a woman, is a gift more precious than gold,
Just don’t ever take it for granted, don’t let your love grow cold.
Because, a man isn’t complete without a woman by his side,
To be a friend, companion, lover and trusted confidante, in which he can confide.
A woman is the missing piece to the puzzling life of a man,
So until the void is filled, man will be incomplete and lost without a plan.
ps
you need a man by your side
[/quote]
What do you mean by this?
i need a woma
sorry I know is your post but here it goes
To have the love of a woman, is a gift more precious than gold,
Just don’t ever take it for granted, don’t let your love grow cold.
Because, a man isn’t complete without a woman by his side,
To be a friend, companion, lover and trusted confidante, in which he can confide.
A woman is the missing piece to the puzzling life of a man,
So until the void is filled, man will be incomplete and lost without a plan.
ps
you need a man by your side
[/quote]What do you mean by this?
I'm with Dark V!
Things Not To Do At Hogwarts:
Crashing a Ford Anglia into the Whomping willow is not the best entrance to make. Crashing it into Snape's office is.
Things Not To Do At Hogwarts:
Crashing a Ford Anglia into the Whomping willow is not the best entrance to make. Crashing it into Snape's office is.
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WAKAI
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re: My poem.
your poem sounded like some thing happen with a men
maybe its just shoot poem or sentimental
idont know.
sorry
ps
i said i need a woman as much as you dont need a man by your side.
maybe its just shoot poem or sentimental
idont know.
sorry
ps
i said i need a woman as much as you dont need a man by your side.
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Re: re: My poem.
[quote="wakai"]your poem sounded like some thing happen with a men
maybe its just shoot poem or sentimental
idont know.
sorry
ps
i said i need a woman as much as you dont need a man by your side.[/quote]
Nothing happened with a man.Not that it is any of your business.I just had it pop in my head when a boy that I don't like started to spread around the school that I was his girlfriend.It took me forever to clear that mess up.
maybe its just shoot poem or sentimental
idont know.
sorry
ps
i said i need a woman as much as you dont need a man by your side.
[/quote]Nothing happened with a man.Not that it is any of your business.I just had it pop in my head when a boy that I don't like started to spread around the school that I was his girlfriend.It took me forever to clear that mess up.
I'm with Dark V!
Things Not To Do At Hogwarts:
Crashing a Ford Anglia into the Whomping willow is not the best entrance to make. Crashing it into Snape's office is.
Things Not To Do At Hogwarts:
Crashing a Ford Anglia into the Whomping willow is not the best entrance to make. Crashing it into Snape's office is.
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WAKAI
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re: My poem.
wow chill
dont get mad now i just wanted to know
[wakai gives a rose and leaves]
dont get mad now i just wanted to know
[wakai gives a rose and leaves]
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WAKAI
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re: My poem.
look dont take me to siriouly i am just 18
my mind still young
ps
i know how you feel same thing happens to me every time.to "often"
sorry to get up in your business it will never happen
dark poetry is my word and i dont break it.
you sound nice i like feisty
like i say my name is wakai meaning young
sorry.[gives dosen roses and askes for forgiveness in one knee.
my mind still young
ps
i know how you feel same thing happens to me every time.to "often"
sorry to get up in your business it will never happen
dark poetry is my word and i dont break it.
you sound nice
i like feisty like i say my name is wakai meaning young
sorry.[gives dosen roses and askes for forgiveness in one knee.
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re: My poem.
Guys can be trouble if they want to make a serious commitment, but most of the time it's the opposite.
Nice poem Crystal, you did well, but frankly I like guys, more so flirting with guys.
Nice poem Crystal, you did well, but frankly I like guys, more so flirting with guys.
I wish to the starry sky, I pray to the Earth
and swear to a love that will not fade.
and swear to a love that will not fade.
re: My poem.
Wakai you are one pathetic piece of crap; way to plagiarize. If you can't write a poem, don't be an ass and copy from others. Thats just low and stupid.
http://www.springcreations.com/id455.htm
The poem that you typed is on that site, word for word.
http://www.springcreations.com/id455.htm
The poem that you typed is on that site, word for word.
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re: My poem.
WHAT?!!! You stole a poem? 
Pathetic....I guess that all of your poems posted on this site are also stolen.
Well...I like ur poem CDM. And I agree. You do not need a man by your side.
Pathetic....I guess that all of your poems posted on this site are also stolen.
Well...I like ur poem CDM. And I agree. You do not need a man by your side.
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WAKAI
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re: My poem.
i never type poems anout woman i found that one and that was a perfect answer to her i dont need a men by my side.
ps
i only write dark poems not love poems
ps
i only write dark poems not love poems
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WAKAI
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re: My poem.
i never type poems anout woman i found that one and that was a perfect answer to her i dont need a men by my side.
ps
i only write dark poems not love poems.
I never said i wrote it
ps
i only write dark poems not love poems.
I never said i wrote it
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Re: re: My poem.
[quote="wakai"]look dont take me to siriouly i am just 18
my mind still young
ps
i know how you feel same thing happens to me every time.to "often"
sorry to get up in your business it will never happen
dark poetry is my word and i dont break it.
you sound nice i like feisty
like i say my name is wakai meaning young
sorry.[gives dosen roses and askes for forgiveness in one knee.[/quote]
*takes roses and forgives.*
my mind still young
ps
i know how you feel same thing happens to me every time.to "often"
sorry to get up in your business it will never happen
dark poetry is my word and i dont break it.
you sound nice
i like feisty like i say my name is wakai meaning young
sorry.[gives dosen roses and askes for forgiveness in one knee.
[/quote]*takes roses and forgives.*
I'm with Dark V!
Things Not To Do At Hogwarts:
Crashing a Ford Anglia into the Whomping willow is not the best entrance to make. Crashing it into Snape's office is.
Things Not To Do At Hogwarts:
Crashing a Ford Anglia into the Whomping willow is not the best entrance to make. Crashing it into Snape's office is.
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re: My poem.
This poem sends a clear message, BRAVO!
It is a little repetitive, i was hoping that the main phrase would have something at the end to sort of bring it out and make the repetition work, but it was not there. Often when a phrase is repeated, it is embeleshed at the end. refer to "I am a Rock" by Paul Simon for a great example.
Nice points and sence of where you wanted to take it.
Please just add the last line again at the end with something to give it a POW.
It is a little repetitive, i was hoping that the main phrase would have something at the end to sort of bring it out and make the repetition work, but it was not there. Often when a phrase is repeated, it is embeleshed at the end. refer to "I am a Rock" by Paul Simon for a great example.
Nice points and sence of where you wanted to take it.
Please just add the last line again at the end with something to give it a POW.