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THE SILVER WIND......

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did you like this poem?

Poll ended at Nov 03, 2006 11:31am

yes, it was really good
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no, you stink
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its okay.........not!!
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lin9
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THE SILVER WIND......

Post by lin9 »

ITS NOT THAT GOOD BUT HEAR IT GOEs.......

THE SILVER WIND

i walk though the sand
on cold dark night
the wind so colorful
on a starry night

the stars in the sky
so bright,
so light,
and ever so right

the voice of the wind
calling out in the night
red, yellow, pink and blue
green, white, brown and black

its voice so silent
as i walk in the night
my tears of blood
making marks in the sand

but suddenly i see
that for once i'm not alone
with a wave of my hand
as i say the word that saved me once
'SILVER'

a strong gust of wind
that blew throw the sky
in a silvery light
a spirit had appeared

her eyes as bright as the moon
as she glided throw the sky
up to the moon she rose
as the colours of the wind
followed behind her

as she disappeared into the night
she said these words
'SILVER AND GOLD'
'WHITE AND BLACK'

i closed my eyes
and opened them again
to find that i was
ling on the sand
Last edited by lin9 on Oct 31, 2006 11:31am, edited 1 time in total.
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Gravy-Train‽
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Re: THE SILVER WIND......

Post by Gravy-Train‽ »

It's good that you know most of your colors, sort of.
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LIL WHITEY
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Re: THE SILVER WIND......

Post by LIL WHITEY »

Yeah, its good because you can describe stuff well. But I don't really understand what happened in the end. Was it a dream or what?
I scream
You scream
We all scream for bloodshed
So pump your fist in the air and we'll paint the town red
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lin9
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Re: THE SILVER WIND......

Post by lin9 »

no it was a real gost that erast her membery!!
i know im weird!! :color:
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