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~Freewrite~
re: ~Freewrite~
no problemo
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
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~*+Mistress Ishrialla+*~
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re: ~Freewrite~
~Freewrite~
I sit outside again in my backyard as I read a book, tho not just any book. A book intitled "Elbon ya mallo" meaning "Young Suisides" a book of all the suicides that teens like myslef and some of my friend's have comited (Like us, meaning around our age). here's one of them: A young teenage boy has commited suicide september 12th 1998 in a subway station by throwing himself in front of the sub way. a witness from the subway said there was a note tapped on one of the hall pillers. the note read "To my family and my so called 'freinds' I threw myself in front of the subway beacuse I am so tierd of living in this world. one thing I can't stand is all the war's and drugs. why can't people just by normal safe and get along? I mean, did god really create us just to kill eachother? I don't think so. let this be a reminder that people don't live to kill, we live to 'live'
~Justen"
This book has many meracios suicides like those, this book is what keeps me sane, strange but true. I read this book and know there is hope.. that there 'is' a reason to live. you just have to serch for you're meaning in life, but trust me and this book, you're reason is out there waiting to be found, you just have to work for it.
(BTW, I made up ALL of that, the book, the books title, the story. all of it. I'm not sure why i thought of that...but I did. O_o LOL)
I sit outside again in my backyard as I read a book, tho not just any book. A book intitled "Elbon ya mallo" meaning "Young Suisides" a book of all the suicides that teens like myslef and some of my friend's have comited (Like us, meaning around our age). here's one of them: A young teenage boy has commited suicide september 12th 1998 in a subway station by throwing himself in front of the sub way. a witness from the subway said there was a note tapped on one of the hall pillers. the note read "To my family and my so called 'freinds' I threw myself in front of the subway beacuse I am so tierd of living in this world. one thing I can't stand is all the war's and drugs. why can't people just by normal safe and get along? I mean, did god really create us just to kill eachother? I don't think so. let this be a reminder that people don't live to kill, we live to 'live'
~Justen"
This book has many meracios suicides like those, this book is what keeps me sane, strange but true. I read this book and know there is hope.. that there 'is' a reason to live. you just have to serch for you're meaning in life, but trust me and this book, you're reason is out there waiting to be found, you just have to work for it.
(BTW, I made up ALL of that, the book, the books title, the story. all of it. I'm not sure why i thought of that...but I did. O_o LOL)
re: ~Freewrite~
everyone does things when they dont know why they did it...
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
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~*+Mistress Ishrialla+*~
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re: ~Freewrite~
*nods* Truuuue, lol. ^_^ do you have anymore freewrites? yours are cool, i want to read more of them! lol.^_^
re: ~Freewrite~
yes, i do- thank you. i like having friends who understand what i write about. It's hard to find poeple who look beyond the words into the feeling and emotion behind the lines written.
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
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what happened to the old locke?!?!?!?!Locke wrote:Wow! Thats a really powerful way of conveying how you feel!
Im going to try it later on
Thanx for sharing this with us, and opening up a new door for me
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
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Re: ~Freewrite~
I love to freewrite, do it all the time, it helps to clear my head, I usually do it after a long walk
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