my poems....by the god of death

god of death · Post by **god of death** » Oct 23, 2007 12:17pm

hello all im sure some of you remeber who i am.. ive been in a slump as of late and well came back here to talk to freinds. anyhow heres a poem. feel free to pm me any time

tormented and torn... lost to the ways of cruelity and harshness
i tried to battle on for so long but now i have nothing left to give
torn between life and death, sorrow and happiness
torn between what could have been and what should have been
the darkness now consumes me... the soul and heart are forgotten
the fire that once burned in me is nothing but ash and soot now
ive beared so much pain in the past years but nothing could protect me,
nothing could stop this blow that hit me, nothing could have kept me the same.
im no longer a person with a soul... im no longer a person with a heart....
im just shell... left behind and disguarded....
a rotting corpse with nothing left to lose...but in one way everything to gain....

Master InuYasha · Post by **Master InuYasha** » Oct 23, 2007 3:34pm

Amazing!

god of death · Post by **god of death** » Oct 24, 2007 10:51am

hmmm sad that only one responsed.. but thats ok thank you for your comment.

Master InuYasha · Post by **Master InuYasha** » Oct 24, 2007 7:26pm

What my one response isn't important.

Just wait more people will respond soon. So be happy

Biki · Post by **Biki** » Oct 24, 2007 10:34pm

GOD! =D! (tis biki

) i love it. its so sad i almost wanna cry. feel free to Pm me if u wanna talk. all my love,
~Biki

god of death · Post by **god of death** » Oct 25, 2007 10:43am

twitchs* its a good thing ive come out of my slump a bit or that would have really disturbed me

Master InuYasha · Post by **Master InuYasha** » Oct 25, 2007 5:55pm

Coynotreally · Post by **Coynotreally** » Oct 25, 2007 8:13pm

Thats really good,death!And sad at the same time.

But I really like it.

Biki · Post by **Biki** » Oct 26, 2007 9:06pm

god of death wrote:twitchs* its a good thing ive come out of my slump a bit or that would have really disturbed me

............r u saying u rnt happy to hear from me? ;.; fine then god. ;.;

Master InuYasha · Post by **Master InuYasha** » Oct 27, 2007 10:23am

No he hates you j/k

Motoko Chan · Post by **Motoko Chan** » Oct 28, 2007 11:18am

Deep meaning...good job.

Commander Sparx · Post by **Commander Sparx** » Oct 28, 2007 11:50am

Thats good GoD it's also the same poem i have seen on the DD.

Good work

god of death · Post by **god of death** » Oct 31, 2007 12:49pm

thank you all... my poems are shared through a kind network if a get enough response to it i end up sending it to the other sites i belong to.

Master InuYasha · Post by **Master InuYasha** » Nov 01, 2007 5:25am

josh · Post by **josh** » Nov 01, 2007 7:42am

Not bad for a rookie.

god of death · Post by **god of death** » Nov 01, 2007 11:13am

rookie? is that because i didnt correct the spelling, grammer and punctatation?
did you ever think that maybe thats my style? my way of writing?

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