True Intimacy - Poem

[Darcava]

True Intimacy

Last night as I drifted off to sleep,
My friend glanced over saying;
She is not asleep yet, she just does no wish to move.
Which I realised was true,
A smile playing across my lips.

We have known eachother for five years,
And can read eachother so well,
I realized last night,
That if I were to live with someone,
They too would have to know me this well.
I can tell how she is feeling across the room,
And vise-versa.

Will I ever meet a man,
Who will want to know me that well,
Whose simple embrace can awaken in me;
The inner flames of passion ?
When a hand on my cheek can ease pain,
I will melt into the ecstasy,
Should such a day ever come.

[Biki]

i like it. its cool you have a friend who knows you so well. i always find myself reading my friend and thats what she says to me everytime: "you know me so well." i especially like the last stanza. what can i say. im a sucker for romance.

[Darcava]

I love to write romance ^_^ And I am very lucky to have such a good friend ^_^ I think it is important to consider how others feel and why they do what they do. IT makes for better relationships. Im really glad you like my poem ^_^

[Biki]

no problem. can you do me a favor and read my poem. it's title is just a date for the moment. i wanna know what you think of it. >.> no one has given me any idea on how to improve it at all or anything. >.>