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Poem I wrote this morning in a cafe

Post by Kaoru Hanabishi »

yup is about me missing Aoi Chan... hope you all like it too

Missing You

Day In, Day Out
You are all I think about
No One can replace you in my heart
Nothing can stop me thinking of you

Being at Uni, I missed you most
The times that you are asleep
And the moments when we both are occupied
I want to see you and to hold you

Passing Stores and places I envision being with you
Spending time together and cherishing every moment
The thought of you smiling makes me smile
And the moments we're together makes me happy

The longer we're apart the more my heart long for you
There are times I want to forsake everything,
Families and Friends just to see you
Because I miss you...
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Awww, thanks hun. It's very sweet. well done.
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that's cute ^^
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Thanks hun!! :D

Thanks Rin!! :)
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thats so friggin sweet! >3wonderful kaoru. :p wonderful. ^-^
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thanks bikiness :D since aoi always on my mind i thought ill put it into words
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All I can say is Wonderful. Would say more but stuff like cute and that sound too girly for me, XD
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scorpionwarrior wrote:All I can say is Wonderful. Would say more but stuff like cute and that sound too girly for me, XD
ah we all human, at some point or the other I'm sure you will want to say stuff like what I wrote to your special someone. Dont be ashamed about liking or showing your emotion scorpio :P
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Kaoru Hanabishi wrote:thanks bikiness :D since aoi always on my mind i thought ill put it into words
wonderfully done. ^-^

scorp knows he's a girl. :p
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Thats really sweet.
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You're obsessed :(
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Nelly wrote: You're obsessed :(

naw im not obsessed just deeply in love :)

If I was obsessed I wud of like flew over there right away just to see her and in process destroying my masters and my relation with my family. Or go steal her off to some remote shed where no one can ever find us. (I saw these in films I they didnt cross my mind...) :P
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Biki wrote:
Kaoru Hanabishi wrote:thanks bikiness :D since aoi always on my mind i thought ill put it into words
wonderfully done. ^-^

scorp knows he's a girl. :p
How do you know that unless........stalker! XD joking

Nah It was great Kaoru, good use of descriptive words and very "sweet" XDDDD
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scorpionwarrior wrote: Nah It was great Kaoru, good use of descriptive words and very "sweet" XDDDD
Thanks Scorpio, I try listen to slow and calm music when I write them makes it easier to bring out those word I think for me any way.
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scorpionwarrior wrote:
Biki wrote:
Kaoru Hanabishi wrote:thanks bikiness :D since aoi always on my mind i thought ill put it into words
wonderfully done. ^-^

scorp knows he's a girl. :p
How do you know that unless........stalker! XD joking
im right behind you. :twisted:
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OMG X.X lol
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