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Forever I shall Love you (poem)

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Forever I shall Love you (poem)

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A poem I wrote for Sam :mrgreen:

Forever I shall Love you
I love you,
with all my heart,
Yes I do,
let's never Part.

Every time we talk,
you make me smile,
Sometimes you make me gawk,
but girl, you still got style.

I want to sit with you and watch the sunrise,
or even the Sunset,
And stare into your eyes,
and be glad we met.

You are Beautiful,
It is true,
Around you I feel more tranquil,
And one last time, “I love you"
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very nice
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Thanks :D
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awwwwwwww x3 sweeeeeet.
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"Sometimes you make me gawk, but girl, you still got style. " <- best part XD!
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Thanks Spruce, and lol yeah I felt like adding the sunny's smiley on the end of that, but it's a poem so no smiley in it XD
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Really nice ^^

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nice one but love is too cliche I don't use it much when I write. :roll:
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Lol, I'll try anything with writing :D
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Hahaha, I see that clearly.
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XD, that makes me remember my story I was writing...>.>
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That there is a cute poem Scorpio.
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Hehe thanks =3
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aww, that's cute *^-^*
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Why didn't I post here?
Oh well.
Now I did
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orly? *glomps* :P
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