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The Day Till I die

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Yasashii Yatsamoto
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The Day Till I die

Post by Yasashii Yatsamoto »

I look in the mirror to think about love,
all that comes to me is pain and sorrow to my heart,
I wonder if ther is anyone out there that really want to get to know me
Till the day I die,

I live alone,
lonely and weak
crippled and wierry
hatefull and pain

Why am I here
Why have I come into this damn choatic world when it likes to play with my heart
There is no one that wants me so I suffer alone till the day I die
Pyro Psycho
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re: The Day Till I die

Post by Pyro Psycho »

thats really good!!!!!!
good work yasashii!!!! =D> =D> =D>
i told yuo about stares dog
Yasashii Yatsamoto
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Re: re: The Day Till I die

Post by Yasashii Yatsamoto »

Pyro_psyco666 wrote:thats really good!!!!!!
good work yasashii!!!! =D> =D> =D>
thankies
Kyle Bloodheart
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The Day Till I die

Post by Kyle Bloodheart »

Where did you steal this one from?
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re: The Day Till I die

Post by ..JUst mE... »

damn, Kyle you don't have to embarass the guy
I can be whatever damn princess I want to be
Everythings better with a smile :color:
Kyle Bloodheart
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The Day Till I die

Post by Kyle Bloodheart »

All of his other poems were stolen, and plagerized.
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re: The Day Till I die

Post by Mai »

edit: plagairized..


but meh. maybe he's changing his ways..


i dont think i spelled plagairized right...lol
I felt like a race horse in a world without racetracks or a champion college footballer suddenly confronted by Wall Street and a business suit, his days of glory shrunk to a little gold cup on his mantel with a date engraved on it like a tombstone.
Pyro Psycho
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re: The Day Till I die

Post by Pyro Psycho »

well it was good ok??!! :wink:
i told yuo about stares dog
Yasashii Yatsamoto
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re: The Day Till I die

Post by Yasashii Yatsamoto »

well I am sorry about that and this poem is not from any except for me
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